Great style Elliot. I like how you've planned out your magazine layout and I think it will be really effective. Also, I like your 'dress code' idea of bringing back vintage fashion.
Very good. I like how you have planned out the magazine with minimalist design and considering the fashion of your audience.
Love the idea! Like the details, about the contents page, double page and title page!
The music and images you have used complement your genre well. I think the images are inspiring for your magazine and your design will fit your audience well.
Your title is very creative and different which links well with your genre. The video shows that you have a clear idea about how you want your finished magazine to look. I think it will work really well and look good.